[Choir] Fwd:

[Mary Alice Bisbee]

What a great program!  But, please, don't forget to tell all your friends
that the sanctuary no longer has an elevette, or accessible access
for those of us unable to do stairs.  *Our sanctuary is totally
inaccessible to people with disabilities!*

On Thu, Dec 7, 2023 at 6:23 PM Donia Prince via Choir <
choir at unitarianchurchofmontpelier.org> wrote:

>
> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
> From: Christopher McWilliams <christophermcw32 at gmail.com>
> Date: Thu, Dec 7, 2023, 11:27 AM
> Subject: Re:
> To: Lynnette Combs <homeplacegirl at gmail.com>
> Cc: Donia Prince <ucm.music21 at gmail.com>
>
>
> I am attaching a third draft. Your helpful suggestions are noted. Going
> once, going twice...
>
>
>
>
> On Wed, Dec 6, 2023 at 11:26 AM Lynnette Combs <homeplacegirl at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>> Thank you, Christopher, for putting together this program.
>> Here is what I noticed:
>>
>> p. 1     good joke, but I don't need the attention!
>> p. 2      take out " after awake in prelude title
>>             I think consistency in names is good - how about first and
>> last names every time?
>> p. 3    see above - Eliza Thomas
>> p. 4    delete the period at end of first line
>>            correct spelling:  Beth Ann Maier
>> p. 5     in the list of performers for the Ave Maria, delete the ; after
>> director
>> p. 6     as noted by Donia, both she and I are directing the Hallelujah
>> chorus
>> p. 8     I suggest this wording at the end:  Donations to the Montpelier
>> Community Lunch Program are happily accepted.
>>
>> See you on Friday,
>> Lynnette
>>
>> On Tue, Dec 5, 2023 at 10:31 AM Donia Prince <ucm.music21 at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Looks great, Christopher! Thanks so much for doing that!
>>>
>>> Just a couple of things. Maybe we could just say combined choir in each
>>> of the pieces instead of listing all of the initials each time. And if
>>> there is a way to say at the end of the list of choirs at the beginning
>>> "and others", in order to include the few people from Old Meeting House
>>> who are joining us that would be nice.
>>>
>>> If you do end up using the initials, our church is ucm, not uu.
>>>
>>> Funny to give Lynette the extra credit as choir arranger :-)! I don't
>>> know you well enough, Christopher, to know your sense of humor, but I am
>>> imagining that that is a joke!
>>>
>>> For the hallelujah chorus, Lynette and I will be both conducting.
>>>
>>> I think that's all I saw. We don't have Internet so I've just been
>>> looking at this on my phone, so easily could have missed some other little
>>> detail.
>>>
>>> Donia
>>>
>>> On Mon, Dec 4, 2023, 2:47 PM Christopher McWilliams <
>>> christophermcw32 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Here it is,
>>>>
>>>>  See you on Friday at 9:30 pm.
>>>>
>>> Unitarian Church of Montpelier
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