[Choir] Fwd:

[Donia Prince]

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From: Christopher McWilliams <christophermcw32 at gmail.com>
Date: Thu, Dec 7, 2023, 11:27 AM
Subject: Re:
To: Lynnette Combs <homeplacegirl at gmail.com>
Cc: Donia Prince <ucm.music21 at gmail.com>


I am attaching a third draft. Your helpful suggestions are noted. Going
once, going twice...




On Wed, Dec 6, 2023 at 11:26 AM Lynnette Combs <homeplacegirl at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi,
> Thank you, Christopher, for putting together this program.
> Here is what I noticed:
>
> p. 1     good joke, but I don't need the attention!
> p. 2      take out " after awake in prelude title
>             I think consistency in names is good - how about first and
> last names every time?
> p. 3    see above - Eliza Thomas
> p. 4    delete the period at end of first line
>            correct spelling:  Beth Ann Maier
> p. 5     in the list of performers for the Ave Maria, delete the ; after
> director
> p. 6     as noted by Donia, both she and I are directing the Hallelujah
> chorus
> p. 8     I suggest this wording at the end:  Donations to the Montpelier
> Community Lunch Program are happily accepted.
>
> See you on Friday,
> Lynnette
>
> On Tue, Dec 5, 2023 at 10:31 AM Donia Prince <ucm.music21 at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Looks great, Christopher! Thanks so much for doing that!
>>
>> Just a couple of things. Maybe we could just say combined choir in each
>> of the pieces instead of listing all of the initials each time. And if
>> there is a way to say at the end of the list of choirs at the beginning
>> "and others", in order to include the few people from Old Meeting House
>> who are joining us that would be nice.
>>
>> If you do end up using the initials, our church is ucm, not uu.
>>
>> Funny to give Lynette the extra credit as choir arranger :-)! I don't
>> know you well enough, Christopher, to know your sense of humor, but I am
>> imagining that that is a joke!
>>
>> For the hallelujah chorus, Lynette and I will be both conducting.
>>
>> I think that's all I saw. We don't have Internet so I've just been
>> looking at this on my phone, so easily could have missed some other little
>> detail.
>>
>> Donia
>>
>> On Mon, Dec 4, 2023, 2:47 PM Christopher McWilliams <
>> christophermcw32 at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Here it is,
>>>
>>>  See you on Friday at 9:30 pm.
>>>
>>
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